weigh改为weightweigh为动词,weight为名词。

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ICP备案序号: 沪ICP备07509807号-10 鄂公网安备42018502000812号 Dear Tom, It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something taking① place in my school at② yesterday. In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18 years③ old birthday. At first we made an oath which④ as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships Λ⑤ bring us up and teachers who had been educating us very patient⑥. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing including⑦. We learned a lot of⑧ from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never⑨ forget the day in my life. 点评:①此处不表正在发生,因此不宜用现在分词作定语,可用定语从句作定语,taking应改为that took。②yesterday, today, tomorrow前面均不可加介词,应去掉at。③复合形容词中的名词应用单数形式,years应改为year。④此处引导同位语从句,which应改为that。⑤此处作目的状语,应用不定式,hardships后面应加to。⑥educate为行为动词,应用副词修饰,patient改为patiently。⑦此处表被包括,including应改为included。⑧a lot of后面没有名词,应去掉of。⑨never此词运用甚妙,道出成人宣誓仪式对主人公造成的积极影响。 总评:本篇书面表达习作为要点式书面表达。小作者首先以时间为顺序交待了宣誓议式的过程,思路清晰、脉络分明。接着小作者交待了自己的感受,感情诚挚,真实感人。Now, At first, Then, And, Finall等过渡性词汇的使用使文章行文更连贯,语句更通顺,逻辑更严密。定语从句、并列句、现在分词作后置定语、宾语从句等高级表达方式的运用使文章表达效果好、表达档次高。所有这些都成为本文一道道亮丽的风景。然而本文也存在一些不足之处,出现了一些语言表达方面的错误,如非谓语动词错误、介词错误、名词单复数错误、连词错误、形容词副词混用错误,说明小作者语言表达尚需进一步提高。但是从总体上讲本文不失为一篇优秀的书面表达习作,值得同学们学习借鉴。 Dear Tom, It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something taking① place in my school at② yesterday. In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18 years③ old birthday. At first we made an oath which④ as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships Λ⑤ bring us up and teachers who had been educating us very patient⑥. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing including⑦. We learned a lot of⑧ from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never⑨ forget the day in my life. 点评:①此处不表正在发生,因此不宜用现在分词作定语,可用定语从句作定语,taking应改为that took。②yesterday, today, tomorrow前面均不可加介词,应去掉at。③复合形容词中的名词应用单数形式,years应改为year。④此处引导同位语从句,which应改为that。⑤此处作目的状语,应用不定式,hardships后面应加to。⑥educate为行为动词,应用副词修饰,patient改为patiently。⑦此处表被包括,including应改为included。⑧a lot of后面没有名词,应去掉of。⑨never此词运用甚妙,道出成人宣誓仪式对主人公造成的积极影响。 总评:本篇书面表达习作为要点式书面表达。小作者首先以时间为顺序交待了宣誓议式的过程,思路清晰、脉络分明。接着小作者交待了自己的感受,感情诚挚,真实感人。Now, At first, Then, And, Finall等过渡性词汇的使用使文章行文更连贯,语句更通顺,逻辑更严密。定语从句、并列句、现在分词作后置定语、宾语从句等高级表达方式的运用使文章表达效果好、表达档次高。所有这些都成为本文一道道亮丽的风景。然而本文也存在一些不足之处,出现了一些语言表达方面的错误,如非谓语动词错误、介词错误、名词单复数错误、连词错误、形容词副词混用错误,说明小作者语言表达尚需进一步提高。但是从总体上讲本文不失为一篇优秀的书面表达习作,值得同学们学习借鉴。 Dear Tom, It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something taking① place in my school at② yesterday. In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18 years③ old birthday. At first we made an oath which④ as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships Λ⑤ bring us up and teachers who had been educating us very patient⑥. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing including⑦. We learned a lot of⑧ from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never⑨ forget the day in my life. 点评:①此处不表正在发生,因此不宜用现在分词作定语,可用定语从句作定语,taking应改为that took。②yesterday, today, tomorrow前面均不可加介词,应去掉at。③复合形容词中的名词应用单数形式,years应改为year。④此处引导同位语从句,which应改为that。⑤此处作目的状语,应用不定式,hardships后面应加to。⑥educate为行为动词,应用副词修饰,patient改为patiently。⑦此处表被包括,including应改为included。⑧a lot of后面没有名词,应去掉of。⑨never此词运用甚妙,道出成人宣誓仪式对主人公造成的积极影响。 总评:本篇书面表达习作为要点式书面表达。小作者首先以时间为顺序交待了宣誓议式的过程,思路清晰、脉络分明。接着小作者交待了自己的感受,感情诚挚,真实感人。Now, At first, Then, And, Finall等过渡性词汇的使用使文章行文更连贯,语句更通顺,逻辑更严密。定语从句、并列句、现在分词作后置定语、宾语从句等高级表达方式的运用使文章表达效果好、表达档次高。所有这些都成为本文一道道亮丽的风景。然而本文也存在一些不足之处,出现了一些语言表达方面的错误,如非谓语动词错误、介词错误、名词单复数错误、连词错误、形容词副词混用错误,说明小作者语言表达尚需进一步提高。但是从总体上讲本文不失为一篇优秀的书面表达习作,值得同学们学习借鉴。 Dear Tom, It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something taking① place in my school at② yesterday. In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18 years③ old birthday. At first we made an oath which④ as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships Λ⑤ bring us up and teachers who had been educating us very patient⑥. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing including⑦. We learned a lot of⑧ from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never⑨ forget the day in my life. 点评:①此处不表正在发生,因此不宜用现在分词作定语,可用定语从句作定语,taking应改为that took。②yesterday, today, tomorrow前面均不可加介词,应去掉at。③复合形容词中的名词应用单数形式,years应改为year。④此处引导同位语从句,which应改为that。⑤此处作目的状语,应用不定式,hardships后面应加to。⑥educate为行为动词,应用副词修饰,patient改为patiently。⑦此处表被包括,including应改为included。⑧a lot of后面没有名词,应去掉of。⑨never此词运用甚妙,道出成人宣誓仪式对主人公造成的积极影响。 总评:本篇书面表达习作为要点式书面表达。小作者首先以时间为顺序交待了宣誓议式的过程,思路清晰、脉络分明。接着小作者交待了自己的感受,感情诚挚,真实感人。Now, At first, Then, And, Finall等过渡性词汇的使用使文章行文更连贯,语句更通顺,逻辑更严密。定语从句、并列句、现在分词作后置定语、宾语从句等高级表达方式的运用使文章表达效果好、表达档次高。所有这些都成为本文一道道亮丽的风景。然而本文也存在一些不足之处,出现了一些语言表达方面的错误,如非谓语动词错误、介词错误、名词单复数错误、连词错误、形容词副词混用错误,说明小作者语言表达尚需进一步提高。但是从总体上讲本文不失为一篇优秀的书面表达习作,值得同学们学习借鉴。 Dear Tom, It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something taking① place in my school at② yesterday. In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18 years③ old birthday. At first we made an oath which④ as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships Λ⑤ bring us up and teachers who had been educating us very patient⑥. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing including⑦. We learned a lot of⑧ from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never⑨ forget the day in my life. 点评:①此处不表正在发生,因此不宜用现在分词作定语,可用定语从句作定语,taking应改为that took。②yesterday, today, tomorrow前面均不可加介词,应去掉at。③复合形容词中的名词应用单数形式,years应改为year。④此处引导同位语从句,which应改为that。⑤此处作目的状语,应用不定式,hardships后面应加to。⑥educate为行为动词,应用副词修饰,patient改为patiently。⑦此处表被包括,including应改为included。⑧a lot of后面没有名词,应去掉of。⑨never此词运用甚妙,道出成人宣誓仪式对主人公造成的积极影响。 总评:本篇书面表达习作为要点式书面表达。小作者首先以时间为顺序交待了宣誓议式的过程,思路清晰、脉络分明。接着小作者交待了自己的感受,感情诚挚,真实感人。Now, At first, Then, And, Finall等过渡性词汇的使用使文章行文更连贯,语句更通顺,逻辑更严密。定语从句、并列句、现在分词作后置定语、宾语从句等高级表达方式的运用使文章表达效果好、表达档次高。所有这些都成为本文一道道亮丽的风景。然而本文也存在一些不足之处,出现了一些语言表达方面的错误,如非谓语动词错误、介词错误、名词单复数错误、连词错误、形容词副词混用错误,说明小作者语言表达尚需进一步提高。但是从总体上讲本文不失为一篇优秀的书面表达习作,值得同学们学习借鉴。

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